Talking-down is pretty well always fatal
How delightful to learn that Ms. Sayers and I both were enchanted by "casting down their golden crowns upon the glassy sea." The too-soon echo of "glassy sea" bothered me, yet the imagery was so compelling!
How delightful to learn that Ms. Sayers and I both were enchanted by "casting down their golden crowns upon the glassy sea." The too-soon echo of "glassy sea" bothered me, yet the imagery was so compelling!